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there is love inside the floorboards
turned upside-down and backwards
writhing like mad dogs
kenneled in metal crates.
the love has since dissolved into bones
for the parasites to eat.
can you stomach my tapeworms,
my fluttering heart pumping faster?

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that's alright.
neither can i.
i've hacked it up
all over the used wood and
oh i'm sorry
love's all soiled and spoiled now,
flush with the ground
like the freon cold out the hotel door
or the white rocket fade over cape canaveral
you've been a daughter to me
your buried shoe-box grief
i felt your poltergeist love like savannah heat
while the waterfall was pouring
crazy symbols of my destiny....

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i like melancholy songs lately they make my heart all loving
i like you too, okay?
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
Sad songs are the best. Yes.
Nice poem.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
absolutely:heart:
thanks!
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silklilies Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i looooooove you

i'm glad you're liking my christmas gift baby bird
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011   Writer
i love you tooooo

i adore it. music is the most perfect gift i swear and it's so much better than just a giftcard because everything's already there for me to listen and love and discover :heart: lovelovelovelove
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silklilies Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
fff yes
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
I swear a part of me was just burnt with the brilliance of this
it hurts hurts hurts
but damnit it's a GOOD hurt
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011   Writer
ohhhh chaiyah you're wonderful
thankyou<3
i'm sorry if it hurts but if it helps then iguess it's okay(:
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
:hug:
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Iniquitire Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
I swear a part of me was just burnt with the brilliance of this
it hurts hurts hurts
but damnit it's a GOOD hurt
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SilverOnBlue Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
nice imagery.
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