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today is hollow metal
folding onto me
and that boy said "um" at the front
of the classroom one-hundred-and-twenty-four times
(i counted)
should've spit out what he wanted to say
it's hard when you're cold and broke
he's not real i promise
fake fairytale breath
but, magdelena, darling
i eat beauty like death
oh god this is real crap but it's all i could muster

everyone should listen to first day of my life by bright eyes
"yours was the first face that i saw
i think i was blind before i met you..."
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
Like this. A lot.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
:heart: hurray
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breathinginthestars Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
'i eat beauty like death.'

oh god.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011   Writer
oh god<3 thank you thank you
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AmarettoMixtape Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011   Writer
that last line is deliciousssssss <3

i count how many times people say um...just saying, haha

i think im in love with your writing.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011   Writer
thankyousomuch:heart:

me too! gosh that part was actually true, he was presenting his project and people said he did a good job and all but i was just focusing so much on how many times he said um that i didn't know what his project was even about

holy goodness that means so much to me :love:
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InTheVioletSky Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
I just learned how to play that song on guitar (:
It's beautiful. My sister wants it to be her wedding song.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011   Writer
that's wonderful all around<3
assuming that i get married i'd like it to be mine too(:
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londonrey Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
i cried while listening to that song last night.
reallyreally. it's so freakin powerful.. i tell ya.
well, i would tell you, but you know.
"he's not real i promise"
"i eat beauty like death"
this.. just, GOSH.
you're brilliant and amazing and you should believe believe believe me.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011   Writer
i cry basically every time i listen to it gosh i'm such sap(:
thank you sososo much that means so much to me especially coming from you
because you're all those things x121221

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