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twisted fingers
small and alive
brushing your blushed neck
pulling your heart from your mouth
labyrinth lies.
made one of these because of *Iniquitire and :icondoctrinaire: :heart:

he said, "who truly belongs here?"
"not i," she said, "i'll lie here with you"
he knows
no one shines forever
they change with the weather...

he said, "i've now stayed too long here"
"goodbye," she said, "i'll wait here for you"
he knows
the winds carry sorrow
as they leave she'll follow
they leave tomorrow

fragments of joy torn apart
a freshly drained heart
that beats
disguise themselves through him
he'll say that it's nothing new
and swear this is true
for you, i'll swallow the ocean

i'll swallow the ocean...

he said, "who truly belongs here?"
"not i," she said, "i'll lie here to you"
i know
the sorrow is sacred
and i'll never break you
i'll softly save you

fragments of joy torn apart
a freshly drained heart
that beats
disguise themselves through him
he'll say that it's nothing new
and swear this is true
for you, i'll swallow the ocean

i'll swallow the ocean...

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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
Lovely in its simplicity.
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
:heart:
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CityLightning Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011   Writer
Commenting here ages after faving; it's so perfect. And your song choices are always excellent. xox
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011   Writer
aww thank you so much!!:heart: and hah i thought no one paid attention to those(: well thanks for paying attention<3<3
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londonrey Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
:love:
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010   Writer
thankyoulove:heart:
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londonrey Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
you're welcome of course. (:
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010   Writer
:tighthug: you da bestestestestest
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mesmeric-revelation Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
This is beautiful (:
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010   Writer
aww, thank you so much!
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SilverOnBlue Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
<3
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010   Writer
(: thankyou
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livesofbirds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Student Writer
feat: [link]
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010   Writer
oh my goodness thank you so much:heart::heart:
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livesofbirds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Student Writer
you're welcome love. <3
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proudeyesneverlie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
this is absolutely stunning. it's one of the pieces i want to memorize forever and write onto every wall i pass. i just... i wish this was a song or something, i wish i could carry it around with me forever. amazing work. perfect work. i'm out of words, star. <3
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010   Writer
proudy... you have left me here with my mouth hanging open and the threat of leaky eyes.(i'm a right SAP.)
i don't think i have the words to express my gratitude, or my happiness in the thought of something i wrote having this kind of effect on someone. just...thank you so, so much. and take this :huggle: in hopes that the warmth travels to you and maybe my actions speak more than my words for once. (i've never been the type of person to act.)
:heart:
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proudeyesneverlie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
you aren't a sap! you just have emotion, which is what makes you such a fantastic writer. <3
:huggle:
your words have always spoken loud and clear to me. =)
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010   Writer
awww that made me smile:heart:

and for that i am infinitely glad. your words do the same to me<333
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proudeyesneverlie Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
i'm glad to know that. <33
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010   Writer
:huggle:
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